急救方法与技巧 热点06-备战2023年中考英语高分作文（浙江专用版）.docx

备战2023年中考英语高分作文 热点 06 急救方法与技巧 一、材料作文 1．你班要举办题为“My hero (英雄)”的英文手抄报比赛，你打算写你的朋友李华勇救落水儿童的感人事迹。上周六你们在去博物馆的路上，他不顾个人安危，勇敢地跳入河里救落出了一名落水儿童，同行的你目击了这一切，深受感动。请根据提示写一篇短文，为手抄报比赛做准备。 提示： 1.介绍事情发生的大致经过； 2.描述李华的英勇行为； 3.就此事写出你的感受。 要求： 1.使用一般过去时和过去进行时； 2.内容应包括所有提示要点，可适当发挥；词数不少于80。 参考词汇：勇敢的brave My Hero ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【 参考范文 】 My Hero At 3 o’clock last Saturday, my friend Li Hua and I were making our way to the museum. While we were walking past a park, we saw three boys playing football. They were playing happily when a boy played the ball so hard that the ball flew into the river. He ran quickly after it and fell into the water, too. While I was calling for help, Li Hua jumped into the water without thinking to save the boy. Although it was a little difficult, Li Hua tried his best to get the boy out of the water. He told those boys not to play by the river anymore. Li Hua was brave enough to help others out of danger. He set a good example to us. He is my hero and I’m proud of him. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“过去进行时”； ③提示：题干已给出故事背景，应根据提示内容，紧扣主题展开写作，可适当添加细节，突出重点内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步：介绍事情发生的大致经过； 第二步：描述李华勇于救人的英勇行为； 第三步：表达作者的内心感受。 [亮点词汇] ①make one’s way to向……进发、前往某处